Paid acquisition

Fix The Offer Before You Run Ads

There is no better trick in marketing than a no brainer offer with a stack of proof behind it. The best ad creative is an offer written so simply people feel dumb saying no. The second best is a testimonial.

Most companies with an ads problem do not have an ads problem. They are putting budget behind an offer that was never going to work, and the budget makes it fail faster.

What should you fix before you spend another dollar on ads?

Two things, in this order. A no brainer offer, and a stack of proof behind it. There is no better trick in marketing than those two together, and no amount of targeting, bidding, or creative testing substitutes for either.

What makes an offer a no brainer?

It is written out so simply that people feel dumb saying no.

That is the test. Not clever, not differentiated, not “compelling.” So plain that turning it down feels like a mistake. Trustify ran on one line: you do not pay a cent until a bad review is removed. There is nothing to think about in that sentence.

If you have to explain the offer, you do not have one yet. You have a product description.

What is the best ad creative?

The offer, written out plainly. That is the whole creative. No concept, no metaphor, no production. Just what someone gets and what it costs them to find out.

Rank Creative Why it works
1 The offer, stated simply Nothing to decode. The buyer either wants it or does not
2 A testimonial Proof, from someone who is not you
3 Everything else Competes on attention rather than on the deal

Why are testimonials second?

Because a strong offer creates one objection, and proof is the only thing that answers it. The better the offer sounds, the more the buyer wonders what the catch is. A customer saying it worked closes that gap in a way nothing you write about yourself can.

Stack them. One testimonial reads like a lucky case. Six of them read like a pattern.

What does this mean for the ad account?

Less than founders want it to. Structure, bidding, and audience testing are real work and they matter at the margin. They do not rescue an offer nobody wants, and they are not the reason a good offer scales.

Spend the time on the offer and the proof first. The account gets easy after that.

Questions about offers and ad creative

What should you fix before running ads?

The offer, and the proof behind it. An offer so simple that people feel dumb saying no does more than any targeting change or creative test. Ads put an offer in front of people. A weak one just fails faster with a budget behind it.

What is the best performing ad creative in B2B?

The offer itself, written out plainly. Not a concept, not a metaphor, just what someone gets and what it costs them to find out. The second best is a testimonial, because proof is the only thing that answers the objection an offer creates.

How do you know an offer is strong enough to advertise?

Say it out loud in one sentence and watch the reaction. If the person has to ask a clarifying question, it is not there yet. Trustify's was one line: you do not pay a cent until a bad review is removed.

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